freenovelworld Chapter 334: Change It If It's Bad
Chapter 334: Change It If It's Bad
Just like Xue Ze said before.
This is just a semi-finished product that he, a novice, produced on time and in a rush.
The common sense errors that can be found everywhere cannot be simply called flaws.
This is a work that will make the blood pressure of anyone who can read music rise.
Let’s put aside the slightly ugly handwriting of the musical notes.
Bai Yuan could even see from the lines the inner struggles of the music instructors that Xue Ze had consulted.
And the traces that although they tried their best to save it, in the end they could only resign themselves to their fate and give up after endless setbacks.
Submit such works to review and directors.
As long as the other person is not sick, there will be no thought of presenting it on stage.
This is just destroying your own reputation.
No wonder it happened as Xue Ze said, the review team just took a quick look and immediately forced him to replace the song with the prepared buyout song.
Simply because there is absolutely no need or room for modification.
Bai Yuan's comments were blunt and hurtful.
But Xue Ze didn't mind or feel dissatisfied at all.
It’s not like he doesn’t know his own level and how frustrated he gets when he’s creating.
It must be admitted that some things, if not supported by talent, cannot be solved by just a few words of hard work.
"It's really that bad..." Xue Ze scratched his face with his fingers.
He was just a little embarrassed to let Bai Yuan see such poor work.
Bai Yuan did not give a direct answer to this question.
Instead, he picked up the pencil that the other person had casually placed on the coffee table.
Before putting pen to paper, she cast a questioning look at Xue Ze.
No matter how bad the work is, it is the other party's hard work after all.
Bai Yuan is not so arrogant as to make changes to other people's work without obtaining their consent in advance.
That would be too disrespectful.
Bai Yuan has never composed any music, but he has adapted many songs with Wen Yiche.
We know that every change and adjustment is not easy.
She did say that Xue Ze's songs were bad, but she never denied his creative behavior and spirit.
Since it is a song written by yourself, you should cherish it no matter what.
No matter how much Xue Ze teased and mocked himself, his words and expression couldn't help but reveal a hint of regret for not being able to use the music he had composed at the time.
Bai Yuan could also sense from the other person's micro-expressions and various details that he might be hiding something.
Perhaps something really happened at that time that had a certain impact on him, but it remains to be seen.
In other words, if he really didn't care, how could these manuscripts have been preserved until now, and were brought into the new villa by him and placed in a conspicuous place within easy reach?
However, no matter what the reason is, since Xue Ze didn't say it now, Bai Yuan wouldn't ask more questions and infringe on the other party's privacy too much.
Instead, they choose to maintain a good sense of boundaries between each other.
Bai Yuan's detailed action made Xue Ze feel a warm current flowing through his heart.
He suppressed the emotion on his face and said nonchalantly, "Please do as you please."
After getting Xue Ze's permission, Bai Yuan began to write and draw on the music score while explaining it slowly.
"First of all, every song has its own structure. A clever structure can add a sense of layering to the song, just like..." Bai Yuan casually gave a simple example and continued.
“Once the structure is messed up, the original rhythm of the song will also be disrupted, and the listening experience will be too abrupt, which will greatly reduce the final effect of the song.”
She first used easy-to-understand language to briefly explain the structure of the song.
Then, he used the differences between classical and popular music, and gave examples of several melodies by Xue Ze.
"Successful melodies usually vary in steps, up and down semitones and whole tones, with some leaps, which are larger intervals up and down."
To facilitate understanding, Bai Yuan drew a simple curve chart on the blank space of the paper to more intuitively show the changes and development trends of the melody.
"There is usually a focal point, a high note in a melodic passage, around which the rest of the line unfolds..."
Then, she briefly explained the chords and structure.
While revising Xue Ze's work, he also added new things to it.
Until it is modified into a smooth semi-finished piece without abrupt changes in rhythm and melody.
Bai Yuan's voice was as gentle and clear as water, flowing slowly and steadily.
Xue Ze was fascinated by what he heard and couldn't help but be entranced.
While following Bai Yuan's thoughts and learning, his eyes sometimes rested on her jumping pen tip, and sometimes on her focused, serious and meticulous face.
Before the other party discovered that he was absent, Xue Ze calmed himself down.
He forced his eyes back to the paper, afraid that he would miss a single word from the other party and let Bai Yuan down.
As time passed, the teacup beside me slowly grew colder.
Xue Ze also focused his attention completely on Bai Yuan's voice and brushwork.
Put aside other external things for the time being and listen to the lecture with your full attention.
After Bai Yuan had used pencil to make dense yet organized marks and annotations on Xue Ze's original manuscript.
A simple demo suitable for beginners has finally taken shape.
Bai Yuan picked up the teacup next to him and took a sip naturally and elegantly.
Use slightly cool tea to moisten your throat which is a little dry after talking too much.
Then, he looked sideways at Xue Ze and asked:
"Understand?"
Xue Ze's attention was still on the music score in front of him.
Thinking about the ideas and key points explained by Bai Yuan.
He had previously relied on self-study, and as he was in a hurry to catch up, he just learned whatever he saw, without any system or method.
The instructor assigned to the group can only give directions and suggestions, and cannot provide such detailed explanations for beginners.
After that, for psychological reasons, he deliberately avoided such topics and did not seek help from anyone else or start learning from scratch.
Therefore, I haven't made any progress over the years, and I'm still a dabbler with only a limited understanding of composing music.
Now, after listening to Bai Yuan's systematic explanation, I have vaguely grasped some clues.
He also had new insights and thoughts about the things that had previously confused him and that he could never understand.
Therefore, he listened very carefully and was completely focused.
At this moment, hearing Bai Yuan's question, Xue Ze raised his head reflexively and looked at her, "It's a bit difficult, but you explained it in great detail, I..."
As he spoke, Xue Ze unexpectedly met Bai Yuan's gaze.
Look at the other person's elegant and intellectual listening posture.
Xue Ze was shaken by the other party and his brain went blank for a moment.
I completely forgot what I wanted to say.
"me……"
"that……"
"I……"
He kept saying "I" for a long time but couldn't come up with the second half of the sentence.
Under Bai Yuan's still calm and peaceful gaze.
Xue Ze vaguely felt the urge to escape.